blog # 9

Today in class we worked shop our paper’s, we partnered up with a classmate an reviewed our ruff draft’s. I felt that I had written my rough draft well enough to continue in our essay. But after have my paper read by more than one classmate helped me understand what I was doing wrong and write. They also helped me in my liberation. After I read many other of my classmates paper’s then I found out how I sound when I get off track or I don’t put enough description into my examples. They also helped me in fixing my run on sentences. I never really knew when to so and cut a sentence off. Then in class Ms Crawford explained that when I have a verb and a noun that I have a complete sentences. Also by hearing other student’s feedback I had many of the questions I had answered. Especially when I had my tutoring session in the writing lab. My tutor helped me out big time not only have I learned new ways to help me start, continue and finish my paper but they also showed me ways to make it a habit write and speak correctly, but also to keep it like that. We also agreed in our group that without our tutoring session that our paper would be totally different. Because of many errs we didn’t’ see or some of our grammar .From here on out I would proudly go to the writing center for assistance long after I leave Ms Crawford’s class. I’m always open to new ideas and I always need help to remember the old ones. One of our group members had a very difficult time writing his paper not even with the tutor’s help he go anywhere, but after our group editing session he then saw all the new way’s he could progress in.